给大家准备的是英语关于：英语作文不落俗套的亮点词汇和升格范文！希望对大家有所帮助。
不落俗套的亮点词汇
写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力，遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、生动形象。如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上，能够将一些常用词汇进行升华，就将成为高考作文获得高分的亮点之一。
一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法
1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云
写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
①I'm busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near.
→I'm occupied with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is of great importance to me, is around the corner.(2017·天津高考书面表达)
②So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.
→Therefore, I have no choice but to put you to trouble by correcting my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)
2．更新换代，避免重复
展开全文
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。
①The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.
→The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)
②We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be.
→We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also set up a library where the old playground used to be.
3．单词与短语巧妙互用
一般情况下短语优先，应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。
①I've decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.
→I've made up my mind to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)
②We can look at this problem in many ways.
→We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有“内涵”
4．用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇
为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中或小学阶段学过的词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。
①I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
→I owe you an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)
②Second, I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.
→Second, I am sparing no efforts to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(2017·天津高考书面表达)
二、高分必备的亮点词汇
①That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.
→That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better alternative.(2017·北京高考书面表达)
这就是为什么我认为长江之行将是一个更好的选择。
②In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.
→In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.(2014·江西高考书面表达)
在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会非常具有挑战性。
小试牛刀
Ⅰ.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分
1．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达) So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class. Therefore; make preparations for
2．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.various/a range of
3．(2016·北京高考书面表达) Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came up with
4. (2016·四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following. As follows
5.(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things ... made up my mind
6.As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.are supposed to
7.There's no harm in your staying up late sometimes.
occasionally/once in a while
8.The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.challenging
9．So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a model student.intends to
Ⅱ.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文
假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦，并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。
回信必须包括以下内容：
1．自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；
2．发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；
3．存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；
4．对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：高层建筑 highrise building
考生作文
Dear Jason，
I'm ①very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.
Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing ②fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been ③built, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.④More and more schools and hospitals are ⑤useful for the native people. It is developing into a modern and ⑥beautiful city. ⑦But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧serious air pollution, which have a bad ⑨effect on people's daily life.
⑩I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.
Yours，
Li Hua
【升格范文】
Dear Jason，
I'm ①more than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.
Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing ②rapidly during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been ③set up,highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. ④An increasing number of schools and hospitals are ⑤available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and ⑥attractive/charming city. ⑦However, there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧severe air pollution, which have a bad ⑨influence/impact on people's daily life.
⑩In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.
Yours，
Li Hua
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